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Welcome to the first of our series of interviews with this year's National Flash Fiction Day Anthology Editors and Microfiction Competition Judges! Submissions for the Anthology and Microfiction Competition are open until 15 February 2024 and this interview series will resume in the new year.

This week, Diane Simmons chats with Sara Hills, this year's NFFD Anthology Guest Editor, about everything from music to collections to some tips for tackling this year's anthology theme....

 

Photograph of Sara HillsDS: Firstly, thank you for agreeing to be a co-editor of this year’s National Flash Fiction Day anthology. The theme is the natural elements: air, earth, fire and water. Do you have any tips on how to interpret the theme or any advice on how to approach themes in general?

SH: I’m delighted to have been invited to co-edit the NFFD anthology, and I love this year’s theme as the natural world is so rich with possibility and conflict. What happens when there is an absence or excess of one element? How do these elements sustain or destroy life? What sensory descriptions or experiences do they inspire?

I’m a firm believer in free-writing and brainstorming so I usually tackle a themed prompt by first making lists. For example, take five minutes and list everything you can think of to do with one of the natural elements. Write without stopping—just whatever crazy thing pops into your head. If you’re anything like me, you’ll hit upon the common ideas first. But the longer you keep pen to paper, you’ll start to find more unique ideas, ones that spark because they call up hints of character and conflict. As soon as something sparks for me, I’m off running to get the words down. You can do this for each element if you like and see how they contrast or support each other. And if you’re a more visual person, you can also try the elements as the center or main branches of a mind map and challenge yourself to use a handful of the words/ideas you brainstorm in your draft. Above all, give yourself permission to play and see where it takes you.

 

DS: I believe your first publication was for something other than fiction. Can you tell us a little about that?

SH: Good sleuthing! Since my writing often trends toward darker subjects, I suppose it might surprise people to know that my first publications were actually knitting patterns for toys in a natural crafts magazine: an apple tree and a root vegetable garden. Besides writing, making toys is probably my other happy place. When my kids were younger, I spent countless hours making myriad dolls, playscapes and machines… whatever might delight them. Now that my kids are grown I try to filter that playfulness into my writing.

 

DS: You were born and grew up in America and now live in the U.K. How much does America influence what and how you write?

SH: This is such an interesting question. I wish I could say that after living in Europe and the UK for fifteen years that my stories are infused with medieval architecture or the charm of pub quizzes or queues for the sake of queueing. But so much of my writing is still very much rooted in the physical and economic landscape of the US. It’s the smells, sounds and mindsets of home that my writing brain churns over. I don’t know if that’s because the formative years never truly leave us or if that’s just what feels most honest to me.

What has begun to infiltrate my writing more is the lingo of Britain, and oftentimes I don’t notice it. I’m lucky to have a critique group that points it out to me, and then I have to decide if these Britishisms belong in the story. The same is true with sensory details. After discussing one of my stories, a group of astute high school students in Montana reminded me that ambulance lights in the US are predominantly red. Whereas after living in Europe for so long, I can’t imagine them as anything but blue now.

 

DS: Your flash collection The Evolution of Birds was published by Ad Hoc Fiction in 2021. Can you tell us a little about how you went about putting the collection together?

SH: I followed all the advice to start with, such as put your best stories first but save a few good ones for last. But then I decided that the stories felt like they wanted to be in conversation with each other. I like to think of my characters as people who might live in the same neighborhood or trailer park, experiencing similar familial situations or challenges. So I grouped many of them by age and theme to try and create a sense of cohesion, and it seemed to evolve from there. I also checked endings and openings for flow and made sure to scatter the stories with bird-related images throughout, playing on the overarching theme. There was a lot of second-guessing, but I’m so grateful for how well it was received in the end.

 

DS: Do you ever listen to music when you write?

SH: I find music incredibly inspiring, especially if there’s a particular mood I’m trying to capture. I often listen to a certain song or playlist on repeat in my non-writing hours while I think about a story. For example, with my story ‘Lil Fucker’ which was recently published at Fractured Lit, I listened to The Smith’s ‘How Soon is Now?’ thirty or forty times while I was churning it over in my head. While I only reference the band in my story, that song perfectly conjured up those gutting teenage feelings of my character, plus it has a muddy sound that reminds me of the setting—the winter sky in Utah where I lived for several years. In similarly inspired stories, I’ve often referenced albums or song titles because most lyrics are copyright restricted.

However much music affects my process, when it comes to putting words on paper I prefer silence so that I can hear my own thoughts. And if I’m in a loud environment, I’ll listen to something like a rainy cafe background with light jazz to drown out distractions. Until I get immersed in the story, I’m a ball of distraction.

 

Welcome to the sixth and last in our series of interviews with this year's National Flash Fiction Day Anthology editors and Microfiction Competition judges! Submissions for the Anthology and Microfiction Competition are open from 1 December 2021 to 15 February 2022.

This week, Diane Simmons chats with Joanna Campbell, one of this year's judges for the 2022 NFFD Microfiction Competition, about favourite flash, breakfast cereal, and her upcoming novel, as well as her tips for writing a great microfiction....

 

Joanna Campbell

Diane: If you could be the writer of any flash fiction ever written, which one would you choose?

Joanna: Probably Sticks by George Saunders. I like the brackets he placed around the story, beginning on Thanksgiving Day and ending with garbage day. Most of all, I love its perfect rhythm.

Diane: You are the author of the short story collection When Planets Slip Their Tracks (Ink Tears) and a novel Tying Down the Lion (Brick Lane Publishing). Your second novel is due to be published in 2022 – could you tell us a little about it?

Joanna: It is called Instructions for the Working Day and will be published by Fairlight Books. It is about a troubled young man called Neil Fischer who becomes the owner of an East German village, which has been abandoned and left to rot throughout the years since reunification, then sold at auction. Neil plans to bring it back to life, but encounters an unsettling reception from the villagers. The renovation project is fraught with setbacks and surreal encounters. These invoke dark memories of his troubled upbringing and the guilt haunting him since the death of a school friend. While Neil struggles with his past, he fails to notice the unsettling atmosphere and escalating danger. In the meantime, Silke, one of the villagers, is aiming to return to her studies in Berlin, interrupted over thirty years ago during the Cold War when she attempted to escape.

Diane: Can you remember the first time you heard the term ‘flash fiction’ or the first flash fiction you remember reading and admiring?

Joanna: Although it wasn’t termed flash fiction at the time, the first I admired was Chapter V from Ernest Hemingway’s In Our Time. It is a tiny chapter or a vignette; very short, spare and complete. I still know it by heart and it never fails to move me.

Diane: You have always been a big supporter of National Flash Fiction Day and have flash fictions in six of our anthologies, two of which were Highly Commended micro fictions. Do you have any advice on how to write a successful micro?

Joanna: I think it’s best to write your micro without being distracted by the word count. Then you can make sure you write freely enough to capture the essence of your story. Afterwards you can edit ferociously until you are left with its raw, beating heart.

Diane: Do you read when you’re eating? If not, would you if you could get away with it?

Joanna: Definitely! Eating and reading are a good combination. Usually I settle for a bowl of bone-dry, crunchy cereal, because I’m quite spartan and it lasts a long time.

 


Joanna Campbell is a full-time writer from the Cotswolds. Her short stories have won first place in the 2011 Exeter Writers competition, the 2013 Bath Short Story Award Local Prize, the 2015 London Short Story Prize, the 2018 Magic Oxygen Literary Prize and the 2018 Retreat West Short Story Prize. Joanna’s flash fiction won second place in the 2017 Bridport Prize, for which her short stories have been shortlisted many times. Her novella-in-flash, A Safer Way to Fall, was a runner-up in the inaugural Bath Flash Fiction Award and published in How To Make A Window Snake (Ad Hoc Fiction). Her short story collection, When Planets Slip Their Tracks, was published in 2016 (Ink Tears). It was shortlisted for the Rubery International Book Award and longlisted for the Edge Hill University Story Prize. Her novel, Tying Down The Lion, was published in 2015 (Brick Lane Publishing). Her next novel, Instructions for the Working Day, will be published in 2022 (Fairlight Books). She is on Twitter at @joannacampbell_.

Welcome to the fifth in our series of interviews with this year's National Flash Fiction Day Anthology editors and Microfiction Competition judges! Submissions for the Anthology and Microfiction Competition are open from 1 December 2021 to 15 February 2022.

This week, Diane Simmons chats with Damhnait Monaghan, one of this year's judges for the 2022 NFFD Microfiction Competition, about writing from life, favourite childhood books, and writing everything from micros to novells-in-flash to novels....

 

Damhnait Monaghan

Diane: Your novella-in-flash The Neverlands was published by V. Press in 2019. Many of the flash fictions within are very short and might be classed as microfiction. Do you have any tips for entrants to the microfiction competition on how to write a successful story of a hundred words or fewer?

Damhnait: Writing a complete story with a narrative arc in 100 words is challenging. But it might be my favourite flash form. I tend to write the first draft without worrying too much about the word count (within reason). I write long, then slash back. It’s like solving a puzzle; I enjoy it immensely.

There is a wealth of brilliant advice available online from previous judges of this competition. My tip is specifically aimed at those who are new to the 100 word micro. Study what other writers have accomplished in 100 words. Read widely in the form, not to copy, but to learn. Look at word choice, narrative arc, titles, the entire package. Read some of the pieces out loud to explore cadence and rhythm. Then write YOUR 100 words, the ones that only you could.

Diane: Your novel New Girl in Little Cove (Harper Collins) came out to great reviews earlier this year. Do you think your novel writing has been influenced by your flash fiction writing at all?

Damhnait: Thank you. I’m still smiling.

I turned to flash after shelving an earlier version of New Girl in Little Cove. I’d queried widely and come close a few times, but ultimately failed. But the characters kept whispering in my ear, so eventually I went back and completely rewrote it. I firmly believe that my deep dive into flash writing helped immensely. Obviously, there’s more room to manoeuvre in a novel, but the flash writer’s toolbox – word choice, emotion, resonance, someone or something changing (or failing to) – applies equally to longer form writing. I also think writing flash hones your editing skills. You learn to be quite ruthless at the sentence level. Cut, change, revise. Get it down quickly, then make it better slowly, is the way I now approach writing of any length.

Diane: I know you are a great reader of fiction. Did you read much as a child? If so, was there one particular book or short story that you still hold particularly dear?

Damhnait: I read obsessively as a child. The library was my great friend and still is today. I loved finding a series: the Bobbsey Twins, the Little House books, Nancy Drew – I could go on. But the book (and series) I still hold dear is Anne of Green Gables. Long after my childhood ended, it remained my comfort read. There’s even a reference to it in the opening chapter of my debut novel; my protagonist Rachel compares her arrival in Little Cove to Anne’s arrival in Avonlea. I was thrilled when a recent reader described New Girl in Little Cove as “an updated Anne of Green Gables for adults.”

Diane: If you borrow from your own life to write flash fiction, do you have a period (i.e. child, teenager, adult), that you write about most often?

Damhnait: Don’t we all? My strongest writing is inspired by my own experiences or those I observe around me. I take a personal memory or emotional reaction to an event and tweak or twist it to make it fiction. There isn’t a particular period in my life on which I focus. I’ve borrowed from childhood and adulthood. Rather it is the intensity of the feelings that the incident aroused in me. The stronger that feeling or reaction, the stronger the writing will be.

 


Damhnait Monaghan was born and grew up in Canada but now lives in the U.K. Her flash fiction has won or placed in various competitions and is widely published and anthologised. She has been nominated for the Pushcart Prize, Best Small Fictions, and Best Microfictions. Her novella in flash The Neverlands (V.Press) won Best Novella in the 2020 Saboteur Awards. Her debut novel New Girl in Little Cove is out now with Harper Collins.

 

Welcome to the fourth in our series of interviews with this year's National Flash Fiction Day Anthology editors and Microfiction Competition judges! Submissions for the Anthology and Microfiction Competition are open from 1 December 2021 to 15 February 2022.

This week, Diane Simmons chats with Chris Drew, one of this year's editors for the 2022 NFFD Anthology, about writing projects, creative influences, and favourite flash writers, as well as his thoughts on this year's NFFD Anthology theme....

Photograph of Chris Drew

Diane: Firstly, thank you for agreeing to be a co-editor of this year’s anthology. The theme is FREEDOM. Do you have any tips on how to interpret the theme or any advice on how to approach themes in general?

Chris: Thank you for inviting me! It’s great to be part of the NFFD team. Freedom is a fitting theme for 2022, and I’m excited to see what people come up with, but I’m hesitant to delve too deeply into an interpretation. Instead, all I’ll say is that in approaching any theme I wouldn’t worry too much about trying to be different. You hear it a lot in the literary community that you need to stand out from the crowd (the dreaded slush pile), but my advice is to forget the crowd and tell your own story. What does freedom mean to you? I’m looking forward to finding out.

Diane: Are there any flash fictions that you remember made you laugh out loud? If not, are there any that have made you cry?

Chris: There are flashes that come along once in a while that for some unfathomable reason stay with you. Something in them – a phrase or an image or perhaps the rhythm – can sink onto your subconscious and surface over and over again. Anybody who reads Sharon Telfer’s My Father Comforts Me in the Form of Birds, or Helen Rye’s One in Twenty-Three, can’t help but be affected by them. Why? Because there’s so much emotion in there presented in a way that isn’t overly sentimental. It’s a delicate balance, but if done right, if the words are chosen carefully, plainly, the reader is able to make an emotional connection to the story independently, from their own experiences, and make it their own. As for humour, there isn’t enough of it in flash fiction, probably because it’s incredibly difficult to get right. Tim Craig is a master at this, so too is Elisabeth Ingram Wallace. It’s a natural-born style. You either have it or you don’t.

Diane: Do you have any writing projects on the go?

Chris: Too many. I have a novella-in-flash that’s currently out on submission, and the beginnings of a flash fiction collection simmering in the background. Recently, I’ve been working on the second draft of a Middle Grade novel that I started writing for my kids a few years ago, so I’d best finish it before they’re too old to care. I also have the first draft of a psychological thriller that I want to rewrite at some point, and a few other novel ideas floating around that have hit the 10 or 20k mark. I tend to work on a few projects simultaneously rather than having a single focus. Whether that’s a good or bad thing I’m not sure. The key, I think, is to just keep writing, day after day after day.

Diane: You were a founding editor of the historical online journal FlashBack Fiction. You obviously enjoy reading historical fiction and I wondered if you write much of it yourself? If so, do you have a favourite time period in history?

Chris: I was in the right place at the right time when the concept of FlashBack Fiction was discussed in a random Twitter thread a few years ago. When Ingrid took the reins and I had the opportunity to work with Emily Devane and Damhnait Monaghan, Judi Walsh and Sharon Telfer (and, briefly, K.B. Carle) I leapt onto the bandwagon. The year I spent as editor there was invaluable to me as a writer, not only in approaching flash fiction from a different angle (as a critical reader), but also to watch the other editors work, their flow of discussion, their insights, and, occasionally, fisticuffs*. I don’t have a favourite period per se; I’m more interested in character. Whether it’s a soldier hunting buffalo and facing his PTSD in Gutshot, fruit pickers helping the war effort in Plum Jam, or a slave trapped in the surreal space between love and mercy in Tyn. I remember each of these stories, not for the historical setting, but for the characters. One of the most remarkable feats of flash fiction is that you can create a living, breathing human being in only a few hundred words.
*No editors were harmed in the discussion of these stories.

Diane: Is there a flash fiction writer who has influenced your own writing? Or one who you particularly admire?

Chris: Goodness, yes. I admire Gaynor Jones for her determination and talent, Stephanie Carty for her courage and compassion, Elisabeth Ingram Wallace for her originality, Eileen Merriman for her general super-human-ness, Victoria Richards for her honesty and diversity of form, and Christina Dalcher and Charmaine Wilkerson for showing us all that dreams do come true. There are others. In terms of influencing, Peter Jordan has that clean, stripped prose that I strive to emulate. He’s helped me a lot in my writing over the years, directly and indirectly, and I always return to his stories for inspiration.

 


Christopher M Drew is a writer from Yorkshire. He started submitting flash fiction in 2015 and since then has been published widely in online journals and print anthologies. He has won second prize in the Bath Flash Fiction (2016), Reflex Fiction (2018), and Forge Literary Flash Fiction (2019) competitions. His SmokeLong Quarterly story Alligator was selected for Best British and Irish Flash Fiction 2019, and When we were young, originally published in trampset, was selected for Best Microfiction 2021. He has been nominated for Best Small Fictions and Best of the Net, and was one of the founding editors of the historical flash fiction journal FlashBack Fiction. You can connect with Chris on Twitter (@cmdrew81), or through his website (https://chrisdrew81.wixsite.com/cmdrew81).

Welcome to the next in our series of interviews with this year's National Flash Fiction Day Anthology editors and Microfiction Competition judges! Submissions for the Anthology and Microfiction Competition are open from 1 December 2021 to 15 February 2022.

This week, Diane Simmons chats with Tracy Fells, one of this year's judges for the 2022 NFFD Microfiction Competition, about cake, humour, and attempting microfiction for the first time....

 

Tracy Fells

Diane: Your novella-in-flash Hairy on the Inside was published by Ad Hoc Fiction a few months ago and reviewers have commentated on the humour in the novella. Do you enjoy writing funny flash?

Tracy: Dramatic pause … Yes.

I guess you need more? Yes, I love writing, or attempting to write, funny flash (and short stories too). I personally feel there’s a need for more humour in fiction, and particularly flash which can focus on the gloomy/darker side of life. Balancing comedy with pathos that make readers both laugh and think, or cry, is a tough gig to pull off well. Laughing out loud is like chocolate for your soul.

Diane: Have you always written fiction? If not, can you remember what inspired you to start?

Tracy: As soon as I could write I started writing fiction, so that would be around age five. My stories and poems were often read out by the teacher to the class and when asked what I wanted to be when I grew up I said “a writer” … There was a brief interlude when I changed that to “showjumper” during my pony mad phase but as my family were working class with no spare cash for a pony I soon returned to writing as my dream career.

Diane: You’re a very successful flash and short story writer with numerous prizes to your name and you’ve been Highly Commended twice in the National Flash Fiction Day Micro Fiction Competition. Do you have any tips for people who would like to attempt a micro, perhaps for the first time?

Tracy:

  1. If you already write flash fiction then take an existing story and edit/cut it right down. Try cutting sentences from the beginning and end, see what it does to the story. It’s liberating to see how much you can take out and still have a working story, which can create a powerful impact.
  2. Write straight into Word (or programme of choice) with one eye on the word total and stop when you hit 100 words. Then see what you’ve got and what could go (probably a lot!). I always write short fiction with one eye on the word counter so I can estimate when I should be hitting the middle or climax of a story.
  3. Experiment. Have fun. Go wild and off-piste. Aim to surprise yourself with what you can write in 100 words. Do that then you will surprise the reader too! Honestly, if you only have to write 100 words what have you got to lose?

Diane: I know that cake plays a huge part in your writing process. Do you have a favourite cake?

Tracy: How long have we got? I love all cake but my absolute favourite is caramel sponge with caramel butter cream, plastered with butterscotch icing and teardrops of toffee. Salivating yet?

Diane: If you could choose three writers to have round for dinner (or cake), who would they be?

Tracy: Jane Austen for afternoon tea and cake, just the two of us because she’s dead and could be a little embarrassed to dine with others. I’m convinced she had a wicked sense of humour and would be a joy to chat with over cake.

I’d love to invite round Kate Atkinson (Jackson Brodie series, Life After Life, and a wonderful short story writer) and Emily St John Mandel (Station Eleven, The Glass Hotel). There would be copious amounts of cocktails, wine and bubbly, mainly for me as I’d be too tongue-tied to attempt conversation. With their character rich novels and complex storytelling the dinner would be more of a thank you, as their writing sets a standard I can only aspire to one day achieving.

 


Tracy Fells was the 2017 Regional Winner (Europe and Canada) for the Commonwealth Short Story Prize. Her short fiction has been widely published in print journals and online, including: Granta, Brittle Star, Reflex Fiction, Popshot Quarterly, Firewords, Funny Pearls and the Bath Flash Fiction Award anthologies (2019 & 2020). She has been shortlisted for the Bridport and Fish Flash Fiction prizes, placed in the Reflex Fiction competition and Highly Commended in the NFFD Microfiction competition (2016 & 2020). In 2016 she was awarded an MA with Distinction in Creative Writing from Chichester University. She is a regular reader for several large short story competitions and leads writing workshops on short fiction. Tracy also writes novels and was a finalist in the 2018 Richard & Judy ‘Search for a Bestseller’ competition. Her debut novella-in-flash Hairy on the Inside was published by Ad Hoc Fiction in 2021. She tweets as @theliterarypig.

Welcome to the second in our series of interviews with this year's National Flash Fiction Day Anthology editors and Microfiction Competition judges! Submissions for the Anthology and Microfiction Competition are open from 1 December 2021 to 15 February 2022.

This week, Diane Simmons chats with Christopher Allen, one of this year's judges for the 2022 NFFD Microfiction Competition, about movement, editing and crafting a collection of flash....

 

Chris Allen

Diane: You have at times described yourself as a nomad. Do you think moving from place to place affects what you write about or how you write it?

Christopher: Indirectly maybe? Characters and situations I’ve encountered around the world do show up in my writing, but only rarely. The tree in ‘Fred’s Massive Sorrow’ was inspired by a tree growing on the top of a building in the middle of Vienna. A man working on the Mekong in Cambodia inspired ‘Kerosene Man’. A river in South Tyrol is the river in ‘Providence’. I just happened to be in Siena during The Feast of Santa Caterina, the memory of which forms the setting for my story ‘Santa Caterina’—but these are exceptions in my writing. I’m usually very much an ‘in-the-mind’ writer.

Always being on the road, though, does affect the way I write. I write on trains and planes or sometimes not at all. I scribble lines on scraps of paper and stuff them in my backpack. I think about stories for months before I write anything. I don’t have a desk or even a bookshelf, but I have memories of both. Writing for me is always a struggle to shut out the commotion around me.

Diane: In your role of editor at SmokeLong Quarterly, you must read a huge number of flash fictions. Is there any advice you can give entrants to your competitions on writing a successful flash or anything you would particularly like to see?

Christopher: I think around 5000 submissions a year since 2008? As a team, the SmokeLong editors read around 3000 submissions each quarter. Honest work that shines through every narrative layer, from word to concept, has a good chance of doing well in a SmokeLong competition. Something innovative with heart will stand out.

Diane: Can you recall a flash fiction that made you cry?

Christopher: When I received my copy of SmokeLong Quarterly: The Best of the First 10 Years anthology in 2014, I took it to the Greek restaurant around the corner from my house in Munich. I remember sitting there alone and choking back tears at more than a dozen of the stories. I don’t remember the specific stories that made me cry, but there were lots. ‘A Soldier’ by Siamak Vossoughi made me cry the first time I read it. ‘Rascal’ by Brendan Stephens makes me cry every time I read it in my Elements of Flash workshop. And lots of my own stories. I get so choked up when reading ‘What if All the Oceans’ that I’ve decided not to try to read it in public again, especially if I’ve had wine.

Diane: Your collection Other Household Toxins was published in 2018. Did you enjoy the process of putting together a collection? Do you have any tips that you’d like to share?

Christopher: Oh yes. The process was satisfying. I love the jigsaw nature of creating a collection. Other Household Toxins went through several permutations. At first the publisher wanted it to be a craft book, but I decided it was a couple of decades and a few collections too soon to make a craft book using exclusively my own work.

I’m not great with advice. Everyone has their own take on what works and what doesn’t. Don’t worry too much. Include only the stories you love. I’ve written and published quite a few stories I don’t love, and they will never be in a collection. A couple of years ago I made a commitment to myself to stop sending out stories just to send out stories.

Diane: Writing and editing must keep you very busy. What do you like to do in your spare time?

Christopher: Editing is a full-time job. SmokeLong is a full-time job. We have a team of talented editors who work so hard. I am continually impressed and humbled by how much work they put into the feedback they give.

Spare time. Oh god. I try to do as much sport as I can. I hike and cross-country ski. In months that are not cold, I try to cycle as much as possible. My dream holiday is just getting on my bike and cycling from village to village until I’m far far away.

 


Christopher Allen is the author of the flash fiction collection Other Household Toxins and the editor-in-chief of SmokeLong Quarterly. His work has appeared in Indiana Review, Split Lip, Booth, The Best Small Fictions and many other fine places. An instructor for more than 30 years, he teaches the flash narrative in workshops around the world, mostly online these days. He is a nomad.

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Welcome to the first in our series of interviews with this year's National Flash Fiction Day Anthology editors and Microfiction Competition judges! Submissions for the Anthology and Microfiction Competition are open from 1 December 2021 to 15 February 2022.

This week, Diane Simmons chats with Karen Jones, one of this year's editors for the 2022 NFFD Anthology, about reading in public, humour, her novella-in-flash, as well as what she is (and isn't) looking for when reading anthology submissions....

 

Photograph of Karen Jones

Diane: Firstly, thank you for agreeing to be a co-editor of this year’s anthology. The theme is FREEDOM. Is there anything you would like to particularly see in submissions? Or not see?

Karen: Thank you for the invite – I’m delighted to be part of NFFD. I’d love to see some wild interpretations of the theme – things I hadn’t thought of, things that make me sit up and take notice. I always say when I’m judging or acting as submissions editor that I want you to surprise me, and it’s no different here. Themes can be constricting but I hope this one can be interpreted widely enough to allow people do something different. Or, you know, if you’re telling an old story, at least tell it in a new way.

I don’t particularly want to see a lot of pandemic stories, purely because I’ve seen so many already, and I’m also not a big fan of twist endings. Other subjects it’s probably best to avoid, again, because we see them so often, are dementia/Alzheimer’s, cancer, death of a child. I’m not saying don’t write about any of these things, just be aware that you may be up against lots of others writing on the same themes, and that immediately reduces your chances of being accepted.

Diane: I always enjoy hearing you perform your stories. Do you have any advice for writers who are perhaps daunted by the prospect of reading out a flash for the first time?

Karen: There’s a standing joke amongst people who first heard me try to perform that I sent earthquake tremors through Partick in Glasgow. I trembled so much that the paper I read from shook, my legs wobbled, my voice quivered. The next time I was due to read I contacted a friend who was a seasoned performer – she even read one of her poems at the opening of the Scottish Parliament – and she told me to read something already published and to say to myself, ‘This is good. It’s objectively good. It’s not something only your pals or family liked – it’s published, it’s worthy. And if the audience don’t get that, sod them.’ While the last part made me laugh, it turned out be excellent advice. Now I absolutely love performing, love the applause, love the validation. I’ve gone from trembling wreck to needing someone to wrestle the microphone out of my hand so someone else can get a turn. Believe in yourself and your words is the takeaway from this. At a more basic level, practise, practise, practise. And read much more slowly than feels natural. And remember – everyone listening/watching wants you to do well. Everyone in that audience is on your side. They want you to succeed, and they will help you do that by cheering for you at the end. And breathe. Remember to breathe.

Diane: Your novella-in-flash When it’s Not Called Making Love was published by Ad Hoc Fiction in 2020. I have head you mention that it draws very much from your own life. Is this something you do much of in the rest of your writing?

Karen: A lot of my stories and flashes and short stories, do, to some extent, draw on my life and experiences. When you write things that have happened to you or people you know, there’s an authenticity to the voice and character that helps the reader connect emotionally to the story. The best stories and characters draw the reader in, make them believe, make them feel. So, yes, I do draw very much from my own life and my own country.

Diane: You use a lot of humour in your flash fictions. Humour can be difficult to pull off. Do you have any tips?

Karen: Funny is hard. It’s probably one of the most difficult genres because, more than any other, it is so subjective. Think of how often you and a friend have disagreed over what is a funny film or sitcom or book. Restraint is probably the keyword where it comes to writing comedy. It can be so tempting to rush in, trying too hard, filling stories with endless funny situations, constant one-liners, all characters having hilarious names, puns by the pound… and that’s where it falls flat. Trying too hard is the worst thing you can do with humour. A gentle touch is, for me, better. Humour tucked into a dark story, or all out humour but with subtlety. Not easy, but so worthwhile when it’s done well. I’ve heard people say that if you laugh at one of your own jokes, you should cut it. I disagree. If you make yourself laugh, cherish it, nourish it – that’s where the gold lies.

Diane: Do you need silence or an empty house to write or would you rather be in a crowded café or a room full of people?

Karen: I don’t think I’d enjoy writing in a room full of people or busy café, though I’ve never really tried. However, I used to get the bus into Glasgow and then walk two miles down to Kelvingrove Art Galleries and sit in in the gallery that exhibits the Scottish Colourists, put classical music on my iPod and write for a couple of hours. That was probably my most productive writing period. On the bus and on the walk, I’d listen to passing conversations and make mental notes of things I could use. At the galleries, I’d people watch, always finding new characters. There was so much material right there. In the past few years, that hasn’t been possible, but I do still love to block the world out by plugging into some Mozart and just writing rambling nonsense until something starts to feel like it might be a story. I have a bit more time now, so may well start my bus journeys and walks to the galleries again. If you see me on the bus, whisper so I don’t steal your words.

*I know very little about art or classical music – I think that may have helped, because I wasn’t distracted by it, I just enjoyed being immersed in it. *

 


Karen Jones is a flash and short story writer from Glasgow, Scotland. Her flashes have been nominated for Best of the Net, Best Micro Fiction and The Pushcart Prize, and her story Small Mercies was included in Best Small Fictions 2019 and BIFFY50 2019. In 2021 she won first prize in the Cambridge Flash Fiction Prize, Flash 500, Reflex Fiction and Retreat West Monthly Micro and was shortlisted for To Hull and Back, Bath Flash Fiction, Bath Short Story Award and longlisted for Fractured Lit Flash Fiction Prize. Her work has been published in numerous anthologies and magazines. Her novella-in-flash, When It’s Not Called Making Love is published by Ad Hoc Fiction. She is Special Features Editor at New Flash Fiction Review.

Welcome to the sixth in a series of interviews with this year's National Flash Fiction Day anthology editors and micro fiction competition judges! This week, Santino Prinzi is in conversation with micro fiction competition judge, Kevlin Henney, who discusses clichés, live performances, and editing tips...

Santino: Kevlin, you’ve read, written, and judged many micros in your time. What, in your opinion, makes a micro pop?

Kevlin: Like anything that pops, there has to be some kind of energy to release. There’s not a lot of space in a micro, so use of language is essential not just structural. Whether the language is shaken or stirred, it can’t be flat — language is where that released energy comes from.

Depending on the story, the language can be spare, novel, humorous, grave, playful, meditated, slow, fast, but it should definitely be. Every word, every construction, is working in a gig economy, passing through but holding down multiple jobs. They have their grammatical roles to fulfil, but they also need to pass interviews on flavour — or feel or colour or whichever sense metaphor captures for you the quality of the story you sense and want the reader to experience — pace, mood, appropriateness — don’t stumble from pathos to bathos. Write but don’t be writerly.

Santino: Where do you draw inspiration for your own work?

Kevlin: Many of my stories grow from moments, either imagined or observed. A toddler unlocking the door of a public toilet onto a concourse, mother not yet ready. A teenager discovering a seam on her neck. Being served an empty plate in a restaurant.

And then this moment sparks another thought or shacks up with another moment... and before you know it a story is growing, whether gently below the surface of your awareness or in a mad rush through your fingers onto the page. There’s rarely a big idea or a strict intention — if those are present in the final story, they are usually late arrivals, realised sometime after the small idea or the accidental insight.

Santino: I have seen you read your flash fiction at various live events and you always read with energy and character. How important do you think going to live readings of flash fiction, or any literature, is?

Kevlin: Where the written word counts as a single medium of expression, reading counts as many. The written word can come alive through sight, through sound and, via Braille, through touch. Reading is sensual.

Giving life to fiction through live readings adds a public performance side to the otherwise private life of personal reading. Stories can support public and private experiences, extrovert and introvert contexts, the prosocial and the hermetic. A live reading can show both listener and reader different sides of a story, it can bring stories to new audiences, it can contribute to the experience of an event, it can be downright fun!

Compared with longer forms, flash fiction is the fiction of minutes not quarter hours, falling comfortably within the limits of attention span, jostling with poetry as a natural fit for this platform.

Santino: People argue that the key to writing great flash fiction isn’t only in the act of writing itself but in the editing, too. Could you please share your favourite writing and/or editing tips that help you transform the idea in your head into the piece of writing you wish it to be?

Kevlin: Editing is where the story can go from toddling around, bumping into inconsistencies and not yet sure of itself, to coming of age, with a sureness of purpose and more solid wordfall.

For me, editing is where I wrangle the words and sentences to defamiliarise and refamiliarise myself with the story. Work out what story is being told while working out how to tell it. Noise words, jobless clauses and filler sentences served a supporting role in the initial draft, but their contract’s over, so let them go.

But what about repetition and cliché? Repetition is double edged (or triple, quadruple...). Conventionally repetition is something to strike out, but repetition can lend a story foreshadowing, theme, pace and rhythm. The answer is not as simple as three strikes and it’s out.

And rather than say that clichés should be avoided, any cliché should either tell us of era or of person — if a cliché has a strong association, work that angle, you’re worldbuilding with an economy of words — or it should be played with and subverted — surprise the reader! But clichés that just fill the space don’t spark joy, so bin them.

Santino: If you could liken flash fiction to a piece of technology, fictional or real, what would it be and why?

Kevlin: Flash fiction is a smartphone. It fits in your pocket but contains the world. You can get lost in it. You can show others. You can take it anywhere and anywhen.

Kevlin Henney writes shorts and flashes and drabbles of fiction and books and articles on software development. His fiction has appeared online and on tree (Daily Science FictionLitroNew ScientistPhysics WorldSpelkReflex FictionLabLitFlight Journal and many more) and has been included in a number of anthologies (The Dark Half of the Year,North by SouthwestWe Can Improve YouHauntedSalt Anthology of New WritingRipeningSleep Is a Beautiful Colour and many more). As well as having his work rejected and make no impression whatsoever on writing competitions, Kevlin’s stories have been longlisted, shortlisted and placed, and he won the CrimeFest 2014 Flashbang contest. He reads at spoken word events, winning the National Flash-Fiction Day Oxford flash slam in 2012, and has performed his work on local radio (BBC Radio Bristol and Ujima). Kevlin has been involved in the organisation of the Bristol Festival of Literature and events for National Flash-Fiction Day. He lives in Bristol and online, where he can stalked as @KevlinHenney on Twitter, @kevlinhenney on Medium and @kevlin.henney on Instagram.

SUBMISSIONS ARE NOW OPEN for this year's National Flash Fiction Day Anthology and Micro Fiction Competition. Submissions close on 15th March 2019. For more information, please visit our Anthology and Competition pages.